text; un:yuuki

[siriusly]

It's been a year
A full solar cycle...and the blood river is back
That means other things may come back too
The moving buildings the zealots
I dont know how many of us are still here that remember...but i think its important to share what we learned so everyone else can be safe

So much here tries to hurt you with your past even if you dont really need any help getting beat down by it
There may be ghosts or creatures that try to drag you down with them
But you can shake free of them if you have the help
So always ask for help OK?

We go forward whether we want to or not after all

Comments

[offinventory]

That's why I asked. I wasn't going to go into space in a two hundred year old emergency bag if it would kill me.

Point was, I usually don't need help.

[siriusly]

That was a really weird way to get to that kind of point...

[offinventory]

Example to demonstrate the point. It's a classic.

[siriusly]

Well OK

[offinventory]

I get your point. Trench goes out of the way to make sure you need help.

I don't have to like it.

[siriusly]

Well no i dont like it either but that wasnt the point i was making either

[offinventory]

But you can shake free of them if you have the help
So always ask for help OK?

How is that not the point you were making?

[siriusly]

No thats the point
The liking it part isnt the point
Wait does my writing not make sense??/

[offinventory]

You say nothing about not liking it. That makes it sound like you like it.

[siriusly]

Well i dont! and whether i do or not wasnt the point at all
This isnt about me its about making sure everyone can take care oft hemselves and each other OK?

[offinventory]

1. Prove how you don't like getting help (examples)
2. Prove how you HAD to get help (examples)
3. Prove how help worked (examples, might be same as above)
4. Point made that people should get help

Bonus, you do it with things you talk about coming back, so that way people don't repeat your mistakes. Point made far more convincing.

[siriusly]

Im not doing homework essays on my own post!!

[offinventory]

Guess we'll just die then.

[siriusly]

No we wont stop messing around!

[offinventory]

There will be people you DON'T convince to ask for help. Statistically speaking, some number of those people will die from Lack of getting help.

But hey, they'll come back! Maybe they'll remember your post then.

[siriusly]

I know i cant convince everyone
Doesnt mean i shouldnt at least say a little about it
But im not writing whole novels about it! im a terrible writer

[offinventory]

You can't convince everyone. You could convince more people.

Maybe you should ask for help from a writer.

[siriusly]

Maybe i will

[he won't]

[offinventory]

I'll keep an eye out. See if you follow your own advice.